You start play Trials of Lust -Final- . You think: "Oh, dis is hentai game." No, friend. Dis is horror game. But not skary monster. Skary text .
We not talk about game. Game is finish. Delete. But... feelings? Feelings stay. Why? Becuz the words are broke. But the pain is real.
"Her eyes are empty like refrigerator when mother go work. You ask: 'Love me?' She answer: 'Love is... yesterday word. Today word is... bye bye.'"
THE END.
Many review say: "Bad English. 0/10." But me? I say: "Perfect English cannot break heart. Only Broken English can."
Final scene. Girl name "Lust" (very original, yes? No matter). She sit on chair. She not move. Game write:
(Article end. Plz no correct my English. Is art.) Trials of Lust -Final- -BrOkEn eNgLiSh-
Now excuse. I go cry into pillow. And dictionary.
Game say: "You see her. She cry. You want touch? But no. She... was... is... confuse."
Becuz real lust? Real love? Real pain? All messy. All no subject-verb agreement. All... -Final- . You start play Trials of Lust -Final-
Grammar? Dead. Emotion? Alive. I cry. Not becuz sad. Becuz I no understand if she dump me or just forget verb tense.
The "is" and "was" fight each other. Like verb battle. You, player, are referee. My brain hurt. But then... I realize. Maybe game mean to do this. Maybe broken English = broken soul.